AHHHHH THIS IS GORGEOUS AND WONDERFUL AND ANGSTY AND SWEET AND EVERYTHING! And I love it to pieces and pieces and pieces. I can't put my finger on what it is about the way you write Tyler that makes me like him so much more than show!Tyler but damn I love him in this. [Maybe it's because he's having sexy times with Caroline and Stefan in your fic lol and not in the show] I also really love Caroline in this. I love that she's such a strong center for the other two to revolve around. I can definitely see her taking that role. It works beautifully. And so so so many lines I love! Like this:
Stefan kisses Tyler in a way that makes Caroline envious, searching and slow and with a tenderness that makes the tips of her fingers involuntarily reach out for them.
So gorgeous. That whole paragraph about him being gentle to earn back Tyler's trust just melts my heart.
And this "He'll come with us, of course," Stefan says. "Assuming he wants to."
Caroline can hear the guilt and skepticism in Stefan's voice, and reaches up to place a reassuring hand across the back of his neck.
"He wants to," Caroline assures him.
Guh perfection. PERFECTION! This whole thing! Never stop writing these three. I'm far too addicted now ;)
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And I love it to pieces and pieces and pieces.
I can't put my finger on what it is about the way you write Tyler that makes me like him so much more than show!Tyler but damn I love him in this. [Maybe it's because he's having sexy times with Caroline and Stefan in your fic lol and not in the show]
I also really love Caroline in this. I love that she's such a strong center for the other two to revolve around. I can definitely see her taking that role. It works beautifully. And so so so many lines I love! Like this:
Stefan kisses Tyler in a way that makes Caroline envious, searching and slow and with a tenderness that makes the tips of her fingers involuntarily reach out for them.
So gorgeous. That whole paragraph about him being gentle to earn back Tyler's trust just melts my heart.
And this
"He'll come with us, of course," Stefan says. "Assuming he wants to."
Caroline can hear the guilt and skepticism in Stefan's voice, and reaches up to place a reassuring hand across the back of his neck.
"He wants to," Caroline assures him.
Guh perfection. PERFECTION! This whole thing! Never stop writing these three. I'm far too addicted now ;)