http://scorpiod1.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scorpiod1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] krickets 2011-06-05 06:32 am (UTC)

Ack, love this! The last line is very striking and I really enjoyed your Jeremy voice, how the passage of time feels different to him than Tyler. Good work.
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