Departure, LOST, Alex/Richard
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kricketsTitle: Departure
Fandom - Characters: LOST - Richard/Alex
Rating: PG
Prompt: Ocean
Summary/Notes: He’s no one’s reason. Future fic. Drabble. Sequel to like some junkyard dog.
It’s late afternoon when she finds him standing high on his hill, looking down across the waves below, his pack at his side, unmoving. Like always.
"They’ve come back for us," she says, though she knows it doesn’t matter.
He could always leave.
"For you," he corrects her, because he’s no one’s cause, no one’s reason.
The distance dissolves between them, her lips at his salty throat, a need she never expected.
He was a pawn.
"Come with me?" The words are hollow because she knows he won’t, his eyes cast ever seaward, waiting for something else.
But not this.
Fandom - Characters: LOST - Richard/Alex
Rating: PG
Prompt: Ocean
Summary/Notes: He’s no one’s reason. Future fic. Drabble. Sequel to like some junkyard dog.
It’s late afternoon when she finds him standing high on his hill, looking down across the waves below, his pack at his side, unmoving. Like always.
"They’ve come back for us," she says, though she knows it doesn’t matter.
He could always leave.
"For you," he corrects her, because he’s no one’s cause, no one’s reason.
The distance dissolves between them, her lips at his salty throat, a need she never expected.
He was a pawn.
"Come with me?" The words are hollow because she knows he won’t, his eyes cast ever seaward, waiting for something else.
But not this.
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Date: 2007-06-25 06:52 pm (UTC)For you, he corrects her, because he’s no one’s cause, no one’s reason.
I love that line like you have no idea. It's so perfect.
Great job, you always leave me wanting more.
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Date: 2007-06-25 08:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-06-25 08:20 pm (UTC)Thank you!!! :D
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Date: 2007-06-25 08:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-06-25 09:24 pm (UTC)Come with me? The words are hollow because she knows he won’t, his eyes cast ever seaward, waiting for something else.
But not this
Those lines were almost heart stoppingly tragic, so beautiful. I don't really know what else to say, you have rendered me speechless so I shall go back to typing up my sad, little attempt at Alex/Richard.
I loved it!
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Date: 2007-06-25 11:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-06-26 01:46 am (UTC)it helps that i love richard immensely, but that's not the point. :D
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Date: 2007-06-26 02:05 am (UTC)interesting look into an interesting character - nice job!
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Date: 2007-06-26 05:59 am (UTC)*blush*
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Date: 2007-06-26 06:02 am (UTC)Anyway, thanks for your comments!
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Date: 2007-06-26 08:18 am (UTC)Who needs to know spanish, right? :P
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Date: 2007-07-10 08:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-15 01:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-15 02:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-15 02:10 am (UTC)Anyway, thank you once again for the compliment! :D
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Date: 2009-02-11 11:23 pm (UTC)I'm very impressed by how you manage to write Richard so well, even though you don't use a lot of words. It's all about the athmosphere and I really like what you've created here.
"because he's no one's cause, no one's reason."
He's very special, isn't he. And I'm just so intrigued with this man. Oh, the Awesomeness of him.
Great job!
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Date: 2009-02-12 03:46 am (UTC)He is so special! I want to write more Richard now, lol. I've really written so little of him. It's sad!
Thank you!