Alex drops her bag by the door and finds Richard in the bedroom, fresh from the shower, his hair sticking out, fresh jeans still unbuttoned, a white t-shirt clinging to his yet dry skin.
Dear god thank you for that mental image *smirks*
I love the theme of the rain here. It ties everything together so neatly and beautifully (I can't help it -- I like weather being mentioned in fic, it's this whole atmospheric thing). The interaction between these two is awesome as well, and feels so very real, especially with the last two lines, the way it ends in a question, a bit unfinished you know?
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Date: 2009-07-22 02:24 am (UTC)First off, getting this out of the way:
Alex drops her bag by the door and finds Richard in the bedroom, fresh from the shower, his hair sticking out, fresh jeans still unbuttoned, a white t-shirt clinging to his yet dry skin.
Dear god thank you for that mental image *smirks*
I love the theme of the rain here. It ties everything together so neatly and beautifully (I can't help it -- I like weather being mentioned in fic, it's this whole atmospheric thing). The interaction between these two is awesome as well, and feels so very real, especially with the last two lines, the way it ends in a question, a bit unfinished you know?
Wonderful work as always!