I love this! Yes, it's noir-like, but with that comes this powerful writing. I liked the way that although this is very much dark!Jack he was still kinda in character...(and I have a bit of a soft spot for dark Jack at the moment :-P) Last paragraph was brilliant about his father who was 'right all along about life and the nature of heroes. But there it was' *shivers*
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Date: 2007-03-06 01:04 pm (UTC)Last paragraph was brilliant about his father who was 'right all along about life and the nature of heroes. But there it was' *shivers*