I just adore this line: grateful as her shivering teeth pierce the ink in his arm, tasting make-believe stars and sweat and sand and sour. you promised you promisedyoupromised.
I really am impressed with the style of this and how well it works and how coherent it is. I didn't even really realize what you'd done until after I was done reading. Well done!
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Re: jack/sun; angst & tatoos; r
Date: 2010-04-19 12:33 am (UTC)I just adore this line:
grateful as her shivering teeth pierce the ink in his arm, tasting make-believe stars and sweat and sand and sour. you promised you promisedyoupromised.
I really am impressed with the style of this and how well it works and how coherent it is. I didn't even really realize what you'd done until after I was done reading. Well done!
Thank you so much!