krickets: (LOST. kate's a spaz)
[personal profile] krickets
title: on search engines and friendships
fandom, pairing, rating, word count: lost, charlie, hurley, desmond, jin, g, 350
summary: missing campfire scene
notes: written for the queen, [livejournal.com profile] toestastegood for the lost luau, who requested charlie and the internet. beta read by the lovely [livejournal.com profile] kmousie.


”This should be enough,” Jin said from behind Hurley as he stooped to pick up another piece of driftwood for the fire.

“I think this is enough,” Hurley parroted unknowingly, and Jin laughed.

“Dude, what?” Hurley ducked below a branch and headed back towards the small clearing where Charlie and Desmond sat close to the fire. “I’m sorry I don’t speak Korean, geez. You know what we could really use out here? Google. Instant translation.”

“Google?” Jin said quizzically, dropping his pile next to Charlie, who laughed at something Desmond was saying.

“It’s a search engine,” he explained. “Hey Charlie, you’re famous right?”

“It has been said before… yes.” Charlie said proudly as Hurley found a spot next to him on the sand.

“You ever google yourself?”

“Excuse me?”

“Google. You know, google. Everybody’s heard of Google. Man, between you and Jin…”

“I know what Google is, you sod.” Charlie said. “The answer is no. Absolutely not. Never. Not once.”

Desmond grinned, his eyes meeting Hurley’s, equally unbelieving.

“Dude, you so have!” Hurley insisted.

“Have not!” Charlie lied.

“It’s totally obvious, man.”

“It really is, brother.” Desmond agreed.

“Yes,” Jin nodded.

“Alright! Gang up on me why don’t you? I admit it! On occasion, the very rare occasion might I add, I have googled myself,” he confessed. “But I’m not proud of it!”

“Find anything juicy?” Hurley raised his eyebrows.

“Well, I do have quite a large number of dedicated fangirls, you know.”

“Fangirls?” Hurley scoffed.

“As a matter of fact, yes. And they have been known to write… things…” Charlie said cryptically.

“Things? Like, what kind of things?” Hurley insisted.

“That is for me to know and for you to never find out.” Charlie folded his arms in front of him seriously.

“Dude, you know I’ll get it out of you,” Hurley promised.

“Not a chance, Hugo.” Charlie winked.

“I think it’s going to be a long night, fellows,” Desmond remarked.

Jin raised his water bottle. ”To friendship,” he said, and the others followed in kind, for there are some things in life that don’t need to be translated at all.

-fin.

Date: 2008-07-09 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gigglemonster.livejournal.com
Awwwww! This is a zillion kinds of adorable.
I love it. Charlie and his fangirls hee!
:)
Plus
Jin raised his water bottle. ”To friendship,” he said, and the others followed in kind, for there are some things in life that don’t need to be translated at all.
d'aww JIN!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2008-07-09 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janie-tangerine.livejournal.com
Oooooh, NICE! I loved it. They were all so IC here, and I could totally hear Charlie here. He'd sooo totally google himself!

And the ending? That was so cute, go Jin! This was really lovely.

Date: 2008-07-09 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Oh it's good to hear you think they're in character. I don't typically write either one of these guys so that is very nice to know!

Thanks, hon!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toestastegood.livejournal.com
Oh no - I made the fatal mistake of drinking while I was reading this and nearly splurted hot chocolate over the screen the second Charlie said And they have been known write… things…” Lol! Charlie is so definitely the kind of guy that would google himself, isn't he? The little rock god...

And Hurley and Charlie's friendship feels so perfect here - their banter and good-natured teasing. I thoroughly believe that Hurley will now have to google Charlie once he's rescue just to find these things that he was talking about!

Really, really cute and IC and lovely. Thank you so much!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Hahaha whooops! But Mmmm... hot chocolate! That's a very queenly drink!

I thought he would be that kind of guy! And I'm super glad you liked this. I have the queen's approval. SCORE. I'm so glad to hear I got the Charlie and Hurley friendship right. I was kind of nervous about that.

Thank you! :D

Date: 2008-07-09 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dazzlebug.livejournal.com
Heee, that was so awesome! Charlie would TOTALLY have Googled himself. You've got their 'voices' down pat - all the dialogue was really believable and stuff that you would just HEAR coming out of their mouths. Plus, nice work on the fangirl reference, hee!

♥!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw, Kayla I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you for reading!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slybrunette.livejournal.com
Dude, you don't write Charlie. You don't like Charlie. But you did. And it was awesome.

I love that despite the fact that it's a completely weird situation you managed to keep them IC. That's a feat too impossible for me, lol.

Love it!

Date: 2008-07-09 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
I know I don't! But this just came to me. I'm glad it seemd to work out and that they were in character. I very rarely write either of these characters if at all. I think Desmond is the only one actually. And I had no idea what to do about Jin, haha. Anyway, thank you for the awesome comment, sweetie. :)

Date: 2008-07-09 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmousie.livejournal.com
You had no idea what to do about Jin until your lovely beta inspired you. :-*

That was gorgeous, honey!

Date: 2008-07-09 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
RIGHT. This it true.

Date: 2008-07-09 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lenina20.livejournal.com
ooooooooooooooooh - this is so amazing. So funny - their voices are perfect, so spot on, and the exchange is funny and poignant and this is the kind of fic this fandom needs. You are amazing. Thanks a lot for this little wonderful piece! :D

Date: 2008-07-10 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw shucks, thanks babe! ;)

Date: 2008-07-09 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] falafel-fiction.livejournal.com
This was so immensely cute. You captured the 'Stand by Me' vibe of the guys trek/campfire scene so well. Each of the voices was spot on. I could hear them.

Everyone's Googled themselves, right?

Date: 2008-07-10 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw, I love your icon! Thanks for stopping by to read. :)

Date: 2008-07-10 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elise-509.livejournal.com
This is so cute! You've got everyone's voices spot on. And we all know, Charlie TOTALLY would have googled himself.

I love the last line bunches and bunches.

Date: 2008-07-10 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Well thank you very much! :D

Date: 2008-07-10 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com
Aww! The ending was so cute, but I really loved them all teasing Charlie (even Jin, ha!) and we all know he totally means he found the slashy RPF XD

Date: 2008-07-10 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Maybe he did and maybe he didn't. ;)

Thanks for reading! ♥!

Date: 2008-07-17 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alemyrddin.livejournal.com
aww. This was funny and sweet. :)

Date: 2008-11-11 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
I know this is like decades late, but thank you so much! :) I don't know how I missed this comment!

Date: 2008-07-17 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zelda-zee.livejournal.com
What a sweet and humorous fic! I loved it!

Date: 2008-07-20 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-07-19 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astra2104.livejournal.com
Heeeeee!!! Oh that is awesome!

As a matter of fact, yes. And they have been known to write… things…” Charlie said cryptically.

Lol...poor Charlie having to read Driveshaft bandom slash ;)

*giggles*

Date: 2008-07-20 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Haha right? Poor Charlie. Maybe he liked it?

Date: 2008-07-21 08:03 pm (UTC)
siluria: (Lost_Team Sexy)
From: [personal profile] siluria
Awww, that's sweet :) I love little campfire moments like this!

Date: 2008-11-11 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Totally belated reply, but thank you so much! Sorry I missed this!

Date: 2008-11-11 10:20 pm (UTC)
siluria: (Lost_Duuuuuude)
From: [personal profile] siluria
Hey, don't worry! I got to read it all over again, and I still think you managed to get the voices down perfectly! :) *goes off to google oneself*

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