krickets: (TEXT. marry this moment; scrubs)
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title, rating: Renewal, pg
fandom, pairing, wordcount: lost, sun, ji yeon (sun/jin), 170ish
summary, notes written for former queens [livejournal.com profile] isis2015 who requested Sun & [livejournal.com profile] thespiansparkle who requested weddings.


Growing up, there was a time when weddings seemed useless to Sun, so unromantic and formal. These rehearsed ceremonies were nothing like the love they were meant to symbolize, if such a thing as love existed at all. In the years of her adolescence, she wasn’t so sure of that either.

So when she finds herself dressed in white, once again staring herself in the mirror, she can’t help but laugh at the irony of it all – little Sun Paik, clumsy and tomboyish, always with the green thumb, skeptic and cynic, preparing to walk down the aisle for the second time in her life.

The sound of Ji Yeon opening the door pulls her from her thoughts. She is eight years old now, and so much like her mother at that age.

Mommy! Mommy!” she calls unceremoniously from the door, her dress already rumpled and twisted. “It’s time!

Sun smoothes a hand over her stomach, and smiles. “Come on, little one,” she says to the child growing inside. “Jin is waiting for us.

-fin

Date: 2008-07-25 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isis2015.livejournal.com
Aww. How beautiful. I love the idea of Jin and Sun reuniting and renewing their vows with their daughter. Here's hoping. *crosses fingers* Thank you so much for this.

Date: 2008-07-25 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
You're welcome! :D I'm glad you liked!

Date: 2008-07-25 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gigglemonster.livejournal.com
Awww dude SEE I knew this was gonna be beautiful.
And you say you can't do happy fic. This makes me very happy!
Perfectly perfect description of Sun in that second paragraph too :)

Date: 2008-07-25 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw, shucks!

Date: 2008-07-25 03:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lenina20.livejournal.com
oh, god. thank god she married jin. it would have been okay, if she'd married michael, though. this was lovely, perfect Sun. such a beautiful look into the future. loved it! ;D

Date: 2008-07-25 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw, well thank you! After that finale, I kind of agree with you about Michael and Sun. Kind of brought back a lot of stuff I'd forgotten about from early in the series. *ponders*

Date: 2008-07-25 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turquoisetumult.livejournal.com
IF ONLY...

I'm still unconvinced Jin is dead. He CAN'T be...

Lovely drabblet...

Date: 2008-07-25 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
I don't believe he's dead either! Not for a single second!

Date: 2008-07-25 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilingeron.livejournal.com
I don't know why, but the comment about her green thumb really resonated with me. This was wonderful, so what I needed to start my day! =)

Date: 2008-07-25 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Well thank you sweetie! :D

Date: 2008-07-25 08:22 pm (UTC)
siluria: (Lost_Team Sexy)
From: [personal profile] siluria
Aww, I really hope that this is in the pipeline for the show. I'm determined that Sun and Jin will have a happy ending!

Date: 2008-07-25 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
I know they will. They have to!

Date: 2008-07-31 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alemyrddin.livejournal.com
aw, this is so sweet. I hope they could really get a happy ending like this one. :)

Date: 2008-11-11 09:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Ack! I missed another of your comments! I'm not ignoring you I promise! Thanks once again, hon! I hope they get a happy ending too!

Date: 2008-10-15 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thespiansparkle.livejournal.com
Oh, wow :)

What an awesome blending of the prompts! I want Jin & Sun to have their happy ending as much as I want Des & Penny--they, too, have battled a lot, and they've grown so much in love that I just want to see them happy with their little girl. So I loved that you brought their daughter into this and allowed them to "walk down the aisle" a second time--after all they went through.

This is far beyond "belated" but I just had to thank you for this, because it's just a beautiful little piece. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Date: 2008-11-11 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw, you are so welcome! Thanks for coming back to respond. (And my reply is a bit late as well!) It was fun to write!

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