[fic] lay me down; fringe; olivia/charlie; pg13

[krickets]

lay me down, pg13
fringe, olivia/charlie, 163
written for falseeeyelashes comment fic snowpocalypse

This is before.

She dreams of him.

He's all hard edges and soft words when he presses her against her apartment door. He's close, but not quite there, lips just out of contact, not close enough to kiss.

Olivia reaches out, her fingers twisting in his hair, pulling him closer. Yet still, he is impossibly far away, only his hips and hands making the contact she needs from him.

"Come on, Charlie," she encourages, pressing herself into him.

"You're gonna miss me when I'm gone, Liv," his words come out a gruff whisper against her lips, all his words come out a gruff whisper.

She always wakes at this point, unsatisfied, embarrassed, her breath uneven, almost choking.

-

This is after.

(After she buries Charlie.)

When he visits her in her dreams now, it is nearly the same.

But his words, those rough hushed tones, are different. "This isn't the end, Liv," he tells her this time.

This time, she doesn't wake up.

-fin

Comments

[workswithwords.livejournal.com]

This is very lovely, and chilling. I love it!

(no charlie icons! fail!)

[crickets.livejournal.com]

I need one of him in his rockin' hat!

Oh! And thank you!

[mbeancntr.livejournal.com]

This was fantastic. Gave me some chills and makes me miss our Charlie.

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I so miss his character.

[ozmissage.livejournal.com]

This is so good, hot and sad and just a little bit eerie. It made me miss Charlie even more than normal. Wonderful job!

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, hon. I never would have expected to miss him as much as I do.

[tokenblkgirl.livejournal.com]

God, I love you so much for this. Beautiful imagery, and in so little words. I love this pairing so much, and your fic just made my night. :)

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Aw, well yay! I'm glad to have made your night!

[dragonzair.livejournal.com]

This is so sad and wonderful at the same time :( I miss the character so much. I was wishing so hard throughout the last episode that they'd show the alternate-universe's Charlie.

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for reading! ♥

I really wish they would show him as well.

[makesometime.livejournal.com]

Oh very nice indeed! Fantastically written :)

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)

[appleindecay.livejournal.com]

This is breathtakingly beautiful!

[crickets.livejournal.com]

As is your lovely icon! Oh my! So pretty!

[appleindecay.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Feel free to snag. :)

[hollywoodgrrl.livejournal.com]

Aw, this is so moving. I just love Olivia sfm, I can't even. You write her so well.

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Aw thank you! I'm so happy about your Olivia love! This last ep kinda broke my heart for her a little more.

This was my first try so I'm pleased it came out well!

[lule-bell.livejournal.com]

Waugh~~~~ this is fantastic. Very effective imagery going on here. Well done.

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. :)

[apckrfan.livejournal.com]

Don't know why I didn't see this sooner, but what a nice piece to stumble across on this Sunday morning. I miss Charlie!

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Aw, well I'm glad you found it! I miss Charlie too. Very much so. I kinda hope that the Charlie from the other side makes an appearance eventually. Maybe it's wishful thinking.

[wickedground.livejournal.com]

sad :( but very lovely. Ah, I wished there'd be more Olivia/Charlie.