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I actually wrote three teen tiny fics for the one-sentence smut-a-thon! [Go play!] Now, whether or not these are actually sentences and not run-ons [or actually smut] is another story altogether!


a place called home; r
dollhouse, alpha/echo; 56
for [livejournal.com profile] toestastegood; prompt--barefoot

Alpha listens to the the sound of her moving around his quarters, Echo's bare feet padding softly around the room like she's at home -- like she belongs here, belongs with him; it makes him hard just to think of it and he reaches out, grabs her by the wrist, "Come back to bed," he says.




reprise; pg13
fringe, charlie/olivia; 56
for [livejournal.com profile] gigglemonster; prompt--torch

Charlie saves her -- not her Charlie, no, but a Charlie very much like him; they torch their blood-soaked clothes outside the remote cabin and Charlie throws his phone into the fire, lets Olivia hold his hand, takes her to bed -- he's not her Charlie, no, but he is a Charlie very much like him.




road to nowhere; r
lost, claire/jack; 104
for [livejournal.com profile] gigglemonster; prompt--flood

Every time he puts his hands on her, Claire thinks of the day she'll finally leave: Jack's thumbs trace along the side of her breasts and she imagines a long dark highway stretching behind closed lids; his tongue slides against the roof of her mouth, and she keens, "I'm going now," the words unspoken; his lips graze the skin behind her ear and Claire can see a life without him; but when Jack presses inside her, her nails marking the skin of his neck and back, his name on her lips, her voice flooding the room, Claire knows that she won't ever say goodbye.

Date: 2010-09-18 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] harlot2.livejournal.com
Oh, awesome! These are quite good. I especially like the claire/jack.

So looking at the page, I know I am doomed, because I will have to go in tomorrow and write something. I already bookmarked one of the prompts, which added with all my comment_fic bookmarks makes 14 prompts now I should probably go ahead and fill before I go browsing for anymore...

Also, I need to go ahead and keep watching Lost, because there were a lot of names in those prompts that I did not recognize at all.

Date: 2010-09-18 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading, hon!

How far are you into lost out of curiosity? They add new people every season. It's a pretty insane amount of characters to get used to.

You definitely must play with some of these. I know how you feel about having so much to write and no motivation. At least with these all you have to write is one sentence! haha.

Date: 2010-09-18 10:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] harlot2.livejournal.com
I'm only about halfway (if that far) into the second season. Hence the non-recognition of any of the characters lol.

I plan to try to catch up with my commentficcing this afternoon. If I can get even a quarter of these prompts filled, I'll feel accomplished. I've been in a total writing rut lately and have only written 20 words total in the last like two months. It's depressing.

Date: 2010-09-18 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
No spoilers, but the further you get into Lost the less you may like my Jack/Claire. Depending, haha.

;)

I've been in a rut as well which is why this little excercise has been fun. Usually "one-line" things scare me, but I was able to fill three prompts! I'm happy for that. Good luck with your writing!

Date: 2010-09-18 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonzair.livejournal.com
Such short lines, yet you capture just how I envision Scarlie and Liv in that kind of situation. I'd love to see you write a one shot with those two.

Date: 2010-09-18 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
Aw thank you. I actually may have to do that before the show comes back. [I don't have much time, do I?]

Date: 2010-09-18 10:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] makesometime.livejournal.com
Love the Charlie/Liv one, thanks for sharing!

Date: 2010-09-18 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com
You're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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